CAT | Writing
By Sara Finegan
The other day I was reminded anew of the most powerful inspiration and teaching tool in the classroom: peer sharing.
We’re still at the early stage of learning how to write a paragraph describing a character that is the second part of our standard Response to Literature. We’d done a lesson on the “how-to” where I modeled and charted the steps.
We’d done a guided lesson on the first several steps: collecting facts about the character from our reading; organizing them by numbering them in the order we would write them. For the purpose of this activity, we were all writing about the same character.
Once kids had organized their data, I sent them off to try their hand at writing the paragraph. They were thrilled when they realized that the writing part was soooo much easier if you had prepared the list and put numbers next to it – all they had to do was turn the jotted notes into actual sentences. As their writing continued, they felt better and better.
They found two partners to share out with
Since we had time left over before the bell rang, I asked them to find two partners and share out their work. I didn’t think this was going to be particularly powerful, since everyone was using essentially the same facts about the same character. But even in a demanding classroom there are those dead moments when things have gone faster than you’d anticipated, and there’s still instructional time left.
Boy, was I wrong
Within about 7 minutes, every single one of my students was back at his or her desk, writing furiously. As I passed by him, Robert raised his head and asked “Is it ok if I write more? I read what Drew wrote and I realized I had more to say.”
Was it okay if he wrote more? I gave him the “DUH” look and a thumbs up.
At the other end of the room, Antonio was reading his own piece, pausing to think, and then drawing arrows down to free lines on the page and adding more sentences. “I forgot that I could write about an inference I have about the character,” he said. “That’s what James did.”
Now, we all know of groups of kids with limited independent thinking skills whose interaction with the work of their peers pretty much involves copying each other, or copying off each other. In that stage of the learning process, peer sharing is still valuable, but perhaps in a different format. (For example, showing the whole class one student’s work at a time on the document camera and having discussions as a group about the writing often works to show kids that many styles of writing are good writing, or how one of the students handled a particularly difficult writing task.)
My guidance wasn’t needed!
In this case, it was perfectly fine to allow the kids unstructured time to gather in small groups and share out without my participation or direction.
This worked because the kids are confident in their ability to learn and to improve, and their understanding that opportunities to enhance their skills exist all over the place. They trust one another and allow themselves to be inspired by each other in ways that teachers cannot emulate.
In a demanding classroom, the kids sometimes demand more intellectual work of one another than the teacher!
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